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0.2.1
>it was important to write without changing a single word at a time
>it was important to copy verbatim
I know the word "verbatim", but it seems too difficult for non-native readers
I keep the original at this time. Any suggestions?
>It is the same structure.
>It therefore has the same structure.
Need "therefore"?
0.2.2
>finding common patterns from multiple units of concrete information
How about: "multiple pieces of"
I used the word "pieces" in chapter 5
0.2.3
>doesn't work as expected.
>doesn’t work as anticipated.
What's the difference between "expected" and "anticipated"?
>That sample code will not directly tell you how to achieve your goal of outputting “Hello, (line break) world!”. Obviously, it will be a code to display something different. However, if you compare this new sample code with the information you collected so far, you will find another pattern, and you can create a new hypothesis about how to implement it to achieve your goal.
I want to mean:
The sample code will not satisfy your goal directly
(The sample code = code which you find on the Internet)
(your goal = outputting “Hello, (line break) world!”)
The sample code is a code to display something different.
However, if you compare this new sample code with the information you collected so far, you will find another pattern, and you can create a new hypothesis about how to implement it to achieve your goal.
(This sentence looks too long, isn't it?)
Moreover, how about to add a footnote as an example of "new sample code"
Code to output "1(line break)2(line break)3" is print "1\n2\n3"
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